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Neon Black - Chapter 1 by ~Crooked-Feathers:iconCrooked-Feathers:



As yesterday, as tomorrow, he was ever-stomping through punctured concrete, bathing in tumorous neon lights. In a way it was bizarre, or even absurd, for this masqueraded beast to drag corpses through illuminated streets, but like every other monster robbed of night, he had learned to coexist with artificial day in a grotesque parasitic relationship reminiscent of that between a clown and his makeup, or a rioter and his crowd. Slumber was wasteful; waste was inexcusable. Diligence was the highest responsibility, to be deferred to at any cost. Therefore it had been decided by the people who know best that the sun should be punished for it's slothful cycles with wires, chemicals, and a low constant humming. The torture would continue until it learned to cooperate.

Clearly audible labored breathing, still and always ever-stomping, he punched jagged holes in solid ground behind him and left a wounded trail. On hysterical summer nights, he marked his footsteps with puddles and dry smears of blood. The crowd parted alongside him. They feigned ignorant blindness and an actor's enthrallment with assorted advertisements, or the idle chatter of their companions, or preoccupation with anything at all that wasn't important to the scene. Once the musk of death had passed, they would resume their lives, further desensitized for the experience.

He marched into unnatural shadows, in a strategically obscured alley on the streetside. The corpse still dragged behind him. He stepped out of sight. With a low grunt, he lifted the body, now significantly skinned from the journey, and carelessly threw it forward. It hit the wall with a soft thud, then collapsed into the dumpster below. There were no clumsy attempts to conceal the spectacle; it was meant to be discovered, mulled over and stared at, daftly prayed for and completely ignored.

Now unburdened, his mechanical stomp loosened into a lighter, more acrobatic gait. A more mocking gait. He stepped back into the literal limelight and smugly basked in its cold glare. Raise your gaze, and comprehend: anonymous force of nature, draped in black and rusty metal, grinning behind phosphorescent goggles and a throbbing steel mask. His breaths were heavy with sterilized bile, carrying the weight of mutilated dissent with every slothful hiss. He slid out his gun and, in the plain sight of hundreds of unblinking eyes, ran his wet tongue across the warm steel.

"There is nothing to fear. Should your right hand cause you to falter, simply cut it off, for it is better to lose a part of your shell than to roast in the fires of your own misdoing." He shoved his gun back into its holster. "There are fates far worse than death."

With that, he took his leave. Exit stage right.
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Author's Comments

The title is a Blood Brothers reference, because fuck yeah The Blood Brothers. :3

Effort? In MY Kyt? It's moar likely than you think! I believe this is the first time I've ever posted effort on here. : O;; So, yeah. This is Kyt writing. Ooh, ahh.

Look how pretentious I am. Lookit all that pretention, right the fuck thur. It's terrifying. :iconimhappyplz:

Yeah. Imma write more of this later. n_n

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:icondragonfable:
...So, uhm... What's this about again? : D;;

Amazingly written, though; I'm jealous, you fucking asshole. D: Write more soon, yes?

Also.

"With a low grunt, he lifted the body, now significantly skinned from the journey, and careless threw it forward."

Could just me and my inferior grasp on linguistics, but it should be 'carelessly', correct? If not, then fuck yeah, linguistics! Fuck no, Grammar! Yeah! :w00t:

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"There is no sanity clause." - Joker, The Killing Joke.
:iconcrooked-feathers:
xDD A guy. Who is part of the Super Special Awesome secret police of a government that recently seized control of -insert setting here-. What they do is, they have Scariz here go out every night and kill a random motherfucker and make a bigass show about it just to show how powerful they are. : O That's the basic idea, there's more to it than that. It'll make sense once I actually show some plot. ^^; This was moar a prologue than anything, I guess.

Thaaanks. n_n Pssh, I'm nothing amazing, and Saturn is also an awesome writer. Saturn is a better writer than Kyt. o-o I will indeed write more! Writing makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside, and I wish I did it more often!

Oh shit, son, you're right! :noes: I fail! -stealthedit-

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“I will have to use stealth instead" said L and jumped in the broken window screaming
:icondragonfable:
Ooooh... : D That's cool. >w<

What delusional world do you live in? owO I can only wish to use words in such a way as that! Dadgommit, Kyt, gimme some of your talent. >B( Kudos to you!

What? Saturn corrected Kyt? : D Zomg, life complete. I can die happy now.

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"There is no sanity clause." - Joker, The Killing Joke.
:iconcrooked-feathers:
n-n Kekeke. I still have some kinks to work out with the details, but I have the general idea mapped out, and the next chapter and ending are pretty figured out. : O

The magical world where Saturn's writing actually makes sense whereas Kyt's often doesn't. BO Srsly, half the people I showed it to when I finished it today at school were like, "So..uhm..what the fuck? I DON'T GET IT. D:" xD

xD Would you like a parade?

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“I will have to use stealth instead" said L and jumped in the broken window screaming
:icondragonfable:
It must be nice having things mapped out, eh? : D;;

But look at how many world renown authors there are and how many feeble minded people are baffled by the vernacular and wide chasm of vocabulary that they don't know whether to pull out the dictionary and try thinking for themselves for once or just give up! B( Hell knows I won't. xwx;; Oh, by the by, is the dude stomping holes into the fucking sidewalk? xwX;; How is he doing that? D:

Will there be confetti? : DDD

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"There is no sanity clause." - Joker, The Killing Joke.
:iconcrooked-feathers:
Chyeah. I have to, because last time I tried writing a long thing I didn't plan it out well and I ended up getting tangled up in story and having to give up. ^^;

I've got a wide chasm of vocabulary..in my pants! 8DDD Yes. :3 He's got sum heavy fukken shoes. They're all metal and spikey and shit, for no reason other than looking scary. o-o

Black and white confetti, hell yeah! : O

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“I will have to use stealth instead" said L and jumped in the broken window screaming
:icondragonfable:
I should probably do the same, but it seems more fun to improvise it. xwX;;

TMI! : DDD;; Oh goodness. xwx;; Did little children shit themselves? D:

:headbang:

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"There is no sanity clause." - Joker, The Killing Joke.
:iconcrooked-feathers:
Whatever works for you, I suppose. n_n

But it's so true! : DDD;; I would imagine so. : O Poor dears.

:iconlatiasyayplz:


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“I will have to use stealth instead" said L and jumped in the broken window screaming
:icondragonfable:
<3;;

Hey. Whatever you do in your spare time, you keep to yourself. B( It's a good thing the mother always carries around a clean pair of underwear at all times. Unless... Oh, no! The mother's shat themselves, too, didn't they? >->

... I am frightened. : O;;

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"There is no sanity clause." - Joker, The Killing Joke.

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